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Uncivilized II

  • Apr 10
  • 2 min read

By Gary Beck

PROMPT—Peace ...

After high school graduation,

the excitement of prom night

we sent them to a foreign land

where they toughened up fast, or died.


The Taliban didn’t have ATMs,

the family car Saturday night

to go to a local make out spot,

but they had plenty of IEDs

generously shared with our young troops.


When our troops finally departed

a fierce, unforgiving country

that ambushed the minds and bodies

of our inexperienced soldiers

who learned the hard way to survive

a completely alien land.


When they returned to the U.S.A.

more foreign than Afghanistan

with no practical applications

for painfully learned killing skills,

too many found out the hard way

they no longer had a place

in our conflicted society.


They couldn’t seem to hold a job,

couldn’t get along with others,

felt completely isolated

from the people they tried to know.


They couldn’t pay rent, lost their apartments,

ended up on the streets

like other veterans exiled

from the lives they used to know.


One of them sits on a piece of cardboard

on a busy corner

with a hand written sign that says:

‘I’m a veteran and need help’.


People walk by and ignore him,

another abandoned castaway

marooned on a concrete island

where no one says thank you

for your service.

Gary Beck has spent most of his adult life as a theater director and worked as an art dealer when he couldn't earn a living in the theater. He has also been a tennis pro, ditch digger and salvage diver. His original plays and translations of Moliere, Aristophanes and Sophocles have been produced Off Broadway. His poetry, fiction, essays and plays have appeared in hundreds of literary magazines. His traditionally published books include 46 poetry collections, 18 novels, 4 short story collections, 2 collections of essays, 8 books of plays and 16 Poetry Chapbooks. Gary lives in New York City.

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